Admissions with Ariane

Content or style concerns? Need to know where to cut? Used AI and want to know if it’s obvious? A final proofread of your PS?

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This is one round of feedback to give targeted advice on content, language, and style to get your personal statement moving in the right direction.

I am an experienced editor who loves crafting personal statements that reflect your specific knowledge, skills, and experience with style and flair. I graduated from the University of Oxford with a BA in Ancient and Modern History and an MSt in Archaeology, and worked at the University of Oxford for six years, so I understand the style required for applications to top universities.

If you would like feedback done via Loom (talking through the corrections), please note there is an extra fee.

I’ve edited thousands of undergraduate personal statements for successful applications to degrees across the arts, humanities, languages, and sciences at all the major UK universities (and beyond).

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UCAS Business Studies personal statement sample Q1

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