Do you want one-time expert feedback on your personal statement? Have you got some content or style concerns? Have you used AI and want to know if it’s obvious? Are you looking for a final set of eyes on your PS?
This is one round of feedback to give targeted advice on content, language, and style to get your personal statement moving in the right direction. NO editing is included.
I am an experienced professional proofreader and editor who loves crafting personal statements that reflect your specific knowledge, skills, and experience with style and flair. I graduated from the University of Oxford with a BA in Ancient and Modern History and an MSt in Archaeology, so I am well-versed in the style needed for academic writing.
I’ve edited thousands of undergraduate and postgraduate (e.g., master’s and PhD/DPhil) personal statements, statements of purpose, and research proposals for successful applications to:
- Leiden University (and other European universities)
- Oxbridge, UCL, LSE, Imperial, Edinburgh, St Andrews, etc.
- All major US colleges (inc. Ivy League)
- Law and medical schools in Canada and the US
- CUHK, SUTD, HKU, HKUST, etc.
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